Good start! Try to equalise the instruments so that we can hear the keys a little better, and lower the bass on the upfront synth!
Keep it up!
Good start! Try to equalise the instruments so that we can hear the keys a little better, and lower the bass on the upfront synth!
Keep it up!
Hey, good job! I loved some parts and samples of the song!
What I would suggest is this:
Refine the sine Synth you are using, maybe using a reverb or something to make it just a bit less thin,
For the piano keys near the begining, I love the idea, but to make it sound more real, try using a Sidechain, or again, dont keep the notes at the same velocity!
Keep up the great work bro!
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Sounds a bit cheap on the drums, but the rest is kinda cool!
I made two versions of this track - this one was more of an experiment with the sound, the other uses the same layout and crappy vocal cut but i think you'd like it more, also a very different style but let me know if you want to hear it and I'll upload it.
Awsome
I share your passion of house music and creation itself and this track is superb. Nothing can describe that feeling :)
how about "meh."
Nice style!
I see you're trying some new genre! it's pretty cool! I like it! Of course, it's still at the developement stage, but keep it up man, I'd like to see where it is heading!
Excelent beat, but feels empty
Let's make it clear, I really like it. But it feels like something is missing, just a little something. If you can, try to play around a little more at the begining, you should really try and work something out, this could be really awsome.
I give you 6/10, 3/5.
*** / *****
Directly to my Ipod
I really can't remember another song I liked this much on newgrounds. The Flash is awsome, but the song is perfect. Thank you for this master piece!
Excelent work!
Really good trancy song, Really good. Nothing else to say.
nice one, really like it
Entirely good... Lyrics are faboulous! Keep up the work!
...evolution
You need more evolution... more progression in your song but still, nice work
I have an older version of this song that doesn't progress at all. I'll make a more advanced version later, though thanks for telling me.
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